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The moon emerged from her mouth.
She swallowed the universe whole,
chewed on little planets,
pushed aside galaxies with her tongue
till comets came rushing out
Laughing, tumbling over each other
zooming away before they clash
into smoky nothingness.
Little asteroids falling out
burnt the moon’s ground.
Then she felt a black little hole
pulling on her insides
and she fell inwards
Leaving behind a moon, proud.
3 thoughts on “First Draft”
Great poem Anita. Enjoyed reading it.
Simply love it.=).
I need to to thank you for this good read!! I absolutely enjoyed every bit of it.
I have got you book-marked to look at new things you post…